On my next draft, I would change the contents page as the middle looks a bit plain. Also, I would change the capital letters which I put at the begging of every word as it is not necessary. Also, I would add a price on the front cover under the bar code. However, there were things that went better than expected. For example, according to our planning schedule, my first draft was not due until the 10th of March, these were finished on the 2nd of March. So I was well ahead of my planning schedule.
Good ideas well constructed.
ReplyDeleteYour front page shows a clear focus on the genre and uses a variety of fonts well. You must make sure that your magazine is not too similar to others in your group. It should be a different edition of the same magazine. I really like your double page spread but it is a little too similar to another member in your groups and will need to be adapted. Also you must be careful with the mages you use in the contents page as some of these images have already been used and therfore can not be used again.